User blog comment:Vasara5/Article Draft/@comment-27754029-20180815223003

This looks great.

I would say that in the first parentheses it shouldn’t have an "aka" and simply stay blank.

Like this:

Hitomi Takimoto (瀧本 瞳, たきもと ひとみ, or Takimoto Hitomi)

Of course if this is wrong in your way of writing it I am fine with it. :)