Thread:AzureKnight2008/@comment-1916698-20170926153556/@comment-5053743-20171023105206

Hi again,

THANK YOU very much for your kind words, Zen-sama. I'm just glad I could help you realize many things about yourself & your past/current relationships (including your romance) **smiles n bows**

About Sairousaikou's saying

Hm... the revised sentence also poses a major problem.

I wonder, since when such a Possession Beast sounds so polite & 'comtemplative', as shown in your new translation? It should have sounded much rougher, and more aggressive. :|

Similarly in this panel,

http://kishin-douji-zenki.wikia.com/wiki/File:Volume_1_page_75_fixed_panel_comparison_by_Semerone.png

First off, I think the redraw is pretty nice. However...,

I don't think Zenki-sama said, "H...how could a mere human being... Do something horrible like that to me, the strongest in this world...?"

Nobody has done anything 'horrible' to him. He sounded too victimized that way. Instead, the Chibi Red Lord should have said:



Taking into account the Japanese texts in this panel:

''く...くっそッ たかが人間に... この世で最強の オレ様が 好なよ--にされるとは''

Takaga Ningen ni... Kono Yo de Saikyou no Ore-sama ga sukinayo-nisarerutowa = "A mere human being... governs me -the strongest Demon Lord in this world- as they like."

So, my translation went as follows: "The strongest Demon Lord I am is being controlled by a mere human..."

In addition, your translation also left out the first line, where the Red Lord actually CURSED. "Kuso" = Damn / Sh*t. :)

Forgive my forwardness, but I do notice  your group's translation tends to tame down everything and very often does not reflect very well a character's personality.

For the past Zenki - your past self, tends to be generally very  RUDE, not only in his action but in his speaking manner as well.

In fact, the Red Lord's speeches often contain many swear words / slang, and his manner is both rough n rude, even when he is a chibi. :|

Next, About your romance

Yeah. I know. :) I'm happy for you, b/c seems like you've found true happiness, my friend. (much sooner than expected, right? Hahaa... =D)

I'd be even happier if you could do me a very small yet meaningful favor, so... could you? :)

About my manner

Thank you.

I'm very direct in most areas of my life, yes.

But, I'm by no means a meanie. It's just I'm not the type of person who likes mind games and beating around the bush, especially when I'm dealing with those I trust. :)

So, Seme couldn't handle my forwardness sometimes?

My apology. :(

I already figured it out a long time ago. She got offended quite easily when I pointed out something she didn't want to hear. As a result, Azure gets a bad reputation over this and is sometimes perceived as callous and mean even when she only tells the TRUTH. :'(

Then again, Seme is being very self-contradictory here. I thought she liked people who willingly 'speak off their mind and stay true to their words, regardless they are punished or respected for it'. :)

Seems that I was right about the advantage she had over Chiaki. :) Generally saying, Seme's love for you was the reason she could tolerate the past you; otherwise, I'm not very sure how things would turn out between you two... :]

Well... It's alright. B/c like I said, I'd rather be a honest sinner than a lying hypocrite. And I shall stay true to my words regardless. :)

And I trust that my Azure Knight would understand. ;)