User blog comment:Zenki7/Fan Fiction talk/@comment-30866120-20170909230108/@comment-27493717-20170909230533

(23:27, September 9, 2017)

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Ah... It makes me happy to see, that my "A Visit from outer Space" fan fics have gained another fan! ^^

Huh? So you like the censored version better? That's fine with me! :D

Yeah, that's true! The uncensored version is called that way exactly because of these reasons. ;)


 * -|The very first version was way gorier=

Thanks! ;)

Haha! Yeah. The ending was supposed to be even more gory than it already is, so actually even the uncensored version doesn't capture the whole thing, which makes it look a bit bland.

Also, the story doesn't really end after everyone but Zenki has died. It continues in the other world he has been abducted to.

That's why the ending seems a bit choppy, because it's a bit incomplete and not the real ending.

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(cheerful laughing)

...why is the story so choppy sometimes
 * -|Who is Kiyu and...=

Haha! Actually, Kiyu is something akin to a moody, teenage creator goddess, that saw Zenki and thought: "Hey, he's cute!" and wanted him as her boyfriend. Then everything goes south very fast, because it's a rather one sided relationship and Kiyu gets very furious.

Also, she simply is just that powerful. I don't think, that the original KDZ has any character, that would be in a similar league to her outside Goki's final form, but remember, that I made the original "A Visit from outer Space" fan fic back in 2007, when I only knew about the KDZ series mainly from playing Battle Raiden and Den Ei Rei Bu and struggled at reading Japanese.

So back in the day, I thought, that Chiaki was Zenki's girlfriend and the original story didn't even have Goki or that many of the other characters in it. I think, it basically only had the characters, that appeared in the Anime Sequence Battles in it!

So Goki and the others were added into the mix way later when I wrote this new version for DeviantArt and thus ended up being a hindrance to Kiyu more than properly fleshed out characters, because... you know... they weren't even meant to be in the story in first place. XD

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Yes! XD


 * -|Actually spoilers=

Haha! Ah, that's okay.

I know... That's why I kept rewriting the story over and over again and why multiple versions of it exist. XD

After being abducted by Kiyu, Zenki reads her letter, gets out of the bed and goes outside, where he meets some aliens, which need his help. He decides to join them and they visit the entrance to hell, where monsters are breaking lose. Now, Zenki has to help Kiyu and some of her friends, so they can save the princess of some snake-people, who has been transformed into a monster and ran off in confusion.

They end up having many whacky adventures in hell and in the end, they manage to save the princess, but they never find a cure for her montrous form. The snake prince and the princess have their wedding nonetheless and everyone lives happily and cheerful ever after.

After this, the story is open ended, because I didn't continue writing it from that point onwards.

Aww... (hugs Chibi Zenki)

The ending wasn't meant to be that disappointing, but I didn't have time to translate the story into English, yet, and thus didn't get to rewrite it to fit my current standards. XD