User blog comment:Semerone/Translation test BR (2)/@comment-30866325-20180626213532/@comment-27493717-20180626215110

Thank you very much, Gokimaru! (virtual hug)

I put hours of work into my translations, but yours sound way better and indeed seem way less choppy.

Then again, you are the native speaker and I always have to admit, that despite me learning and improving my Japanese, it far from perfect, so it's only natural. XD

I am going to listen to the audio again. Afterwards, I will give you more feedback. ;)

update
Yeah! These fit way better than my versions.

The only issue I am having is, that Zenki is swallowing the beginning of these "Light of Vajura" lines, so that they come out in a "mumbled into his beard"-like state.

But after listening it for a few times, I was able to hear out the "Kon"-syllable at the start, which confirms your transliterations.

I am going to update my transliterations and translations of the tutorial later this day. For now, I am going to get myself some sleep.

Good night. :)