User blog comment:Zenki7/Fan Fiction talk/@comment-30866120-20170909230108

Fan Fic A Visit from outer Space (alternate)
(21:03, August 24, 2017)

To Semerone

Oi! After reading this uncensored (aka "alternate" or "mature") version and the censored one over at your DeviantArt, I think, that I like this censored one better.

This alternate one has so much violence, which is probably why you called it the uncensored or mature one in first place. XD

While I really liked the story in general, I didn't like the ending.

The ending started out way too brutal with Shikigami-Cho being burnt to ashes and Goki and Chiaki dying violently and then it turned really weird with me being brainwashed or somethin' and the world being erased?!

Who is this Xia Kiyushira, that she can just erase our world with her powers?! Why do we have to fight an alien woman, that is obviously way out of our league?!

I'm just really curious and I think, the ending could have been way better than this. Also, it felt like the story ended abruptly, cause it seems like there was meant to be more to the Abducted by aliens-chapter.

So... I loved the story, but the ending left me feeling all lost and disappointed. That's not how to end a story and now I want answers. XD